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Redemption - The Nameless by ~polyhymnia:iconpolyhymnia:





Walk down the street in the old town
and there will be the man.
Look closely and maybe
you will see the man.
Entranced by his aura of
filth, despair, hatred, anger.
Just pass by before the mesh
of his misery haunts your path.

Throng walk on, clipping their footsteps short,
but still he can feel their lurid stares.
He stands before the mass
raising his head –
monarch of the street.
People no longer stare, but look
at the eyes of the nameless
as he walks into the fire.

Flame caresses and cloaks him,
blinding him from the crowd,
who look on, silent and scared.
The blaze recedes and the man emerges.
Fire still clings to his body
as he moves down the street,
beautiful and fresh and unscarred,
searching for new eyes.
©2003-2010 ~polyhymnia
:iconpolyhymnia:

Author's Comments

This was an entry to a competition by ~poetrycafe which had to include one of the elements. Amazingly enough, I got 3rd place - thankyou to everybody that voted!

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:iconoddlyaromatic:
The last verse makes it, good stuff. I'll try get more deatiled at some point.
:iconcitizenerazed:
More jenpoetry!

I remember this one, vaguely. I like it. I like it a lot. It just shows your...oh wait, I'm not allowed to use that word, am I?

Oh well, it's still good stuff.
:iconicklefluffywolfy:
Beautifully descriptive... and I love the kind of hidden darkness! Most impressive! :clap:

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